Here is the feedback from my final crit. I am happy with what has been said and I am glad the purpose and content is clear. Some points that were raised was the lack of actual letterpress within the publication, this is a similar issue with myself but due to technical issues and still limited skills this is hard to achieve. Although I feel the scanned samples and letterpress band are good substitutes. It was also mentioned that I spread out my timeline to give more white space which I have acted upon.